The air seems so simple -
open, empty, light
it rolls and floats with buoyant charm
never ceasing its formless flow
Above, the sky
below, the harsh constructions of small minds
the place where damage is incurred
debts are tallied up and never repaid
duties are compounded in ever greater total
I choose the upper quadrant -
leave the downside to the ones who crave order
there's no need for instruction or rulebooks
not when you've found a world of new impermanence
This place makes you float in wonder -
that place seals you in with brick and business deals.













Comments
The sky is another place... We can choose to live wherever we want.
Brilliant use of contrast. Brilliant. It was very shocking: the buildings and the harsh, concrete reality, after the soft, fluid air. Brilliant.
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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
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There's no more life left to live...
If I can't be me, I don't see why I should even be.
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
well written xxx
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"just another dead fag to you... but I'm glad you're on my side"
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I guess being a person who enjoys floating in wonder makes me a little biased.
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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
It's best to float in wonder. There's always something magical to find, if you know where to look
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
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