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From a cheerful brilliance
into a shocked and stricken son
there was a gradual transition
a slip into another from medicinal prescription

From a joyful cunning
into a caution-mindful station
there was a change of motivation
a segue into secrecy at a lower elevation

From a clever anger
into a pacifist insistence
there was a restless new existence
a swallowed bitterness that entered without much resistance

From a innocence divine
into a knowing quite primeval
there was a gradual upheaval
but no chance of a selfsame soul retrieval.
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The evolution of me.

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I could tell what this was going to be at the first sentence. Very nice and original. We all change overtime, and there's no harm in how you changed :hug:

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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


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:iconeffieforshort:
It's novel. I've not read anything like this before.

For that... :+fav: bravo indeed, ole friend.
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Really: :D I wasn't out to create anything new...but I'm glad I have! Thank you!

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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
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You're getting to know me pretty well! Glad you like it!
and thank you :hug:

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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
:iconblackheart276:
Lol, that I am! :D :hug: You're so welcome.

--
Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


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:iconeffieforshort:
Kerchinnggggg! Eh? :)

You're ever so welcome kind sir.
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I love the auto-biographical feel of this.
"a swallowed bitterness that entered without much resistance" as well as your way with rhymes just makes this piece a stand out. :)

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It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran

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