May I keenly gaze of nature's blades?
(green leaf goodness still unbent by motored winds)
Let people move like speeding cars to abrupt ends -
I grow gardens where true life begins.
May I keenly gaze of nature's blades? (green leaf goodness still unbent by motored winds) Let people move like speeding cars to abrupt ends - I grow gardens where true life begins. |
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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)
Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.
^^
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...in aCheap,seedy,bar.
/l、
(゚、 。 7
l、 ~ヽ
じしf_,)ノ
Yum.
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
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...in aCheap,seedy,bar.
/l、
(゚、 。 7
l、 ~ヽ
じしf_,)ノ
Yum.
your work is simply some of my favorite.
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"A word of Advice:
Sometimes it's best to let those hard to reach chips go."
The only thing I didn't like was the word 'goodness'.. it seemed out of place for some reason..
I would also change 'motored' to 'un-motored'.. maybe its just the way I hav interpreted it.
Either way, it's a great piece.
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When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace. - Jimi Hendrix
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That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.
~St. John of the Cross
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